Friday, March 22, 2019

Few Lines In Fierce Pain! Comments

Rating: 5.0

He is too old to cry
Laying his head on his mom's lap.
Men do not cry on any other lap;
He looks for a cave nearby
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

@Edward Kofi Louis, Too old to cry! - Yes, that's it and so the pain is more! Thanks for the comment and the quote.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

@Aqua Flower, 'sometimes we feel better after a good cry' - yes, of course. We feel a lot better and see things clearer. 'Both female and male share same emotion yet society feels men should not show this; ' - appreciate your understanding, dear poetess! Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

@Kumarmani Mahakul, Thank you so much for your inspiring comment and the generous appraisal of the poem. The comment left me much inspired.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2019

Too old to cry! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aqua Flower 21 April 2019

Crying is a necessary release of emotions....sometimes we feel better after a good cry. Both female and male share same emotion yet society feels men should not show this....a good poem expressing this dilemma.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 April 2019

This is a beautiful philosophical poem on pain and tear having nice execution. The last three lines are much impressive and have reality. Thank you sir.

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Lora Colon 22 March 2019

Crying is so necessary for our well being when we get overwhelmed by emotions. This poem explains so nicely why a man would prefer to cry in solitude. A pleasure to read.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 March 2019

Thanks a lot, Lora, for stopping by and sharing your wisdom having read my insignificant poem. I am much inspired by your kind comment and the generous rating of the poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 March 2019

Tears The garbage stone in heart! tears wild mountain in mind! Tears does not let the heart-mind fly o shed it; devastate it let the heart-mind be slacken to fly unchained

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Khairul Ahsan 22 March 2019

Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts here, @Mahtab Bangalee.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 March 2019

This is marvelous poem, sir Khairul....10+++++++++++++

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Khairul Ahsan 22 March 2019

Thank you, dear poet @Bernard F. Asuncion, for your kind appreciation and very generous rating! Much inspired.

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