Sunday, October 1, 2006
Feverish Night Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Watching her from a distance....she rests
Never knowing or feeling.......my eyes
In peace of silent slumber.....she nests
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Duncan Wyllie
03 October 2006
Through the wind and the pain, love shall rise again, awesome piece Geoff Love duncan X
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
01 October 2006
LIGHTEST TINGE OF THE ABSTRACT HERE, SIR G....I LIKE IT! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
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7/30/2025 1:01:33 AM # 1.0.0
Going to be quite honest with you, Geoff. The opening is all right; we'll have it, we will. Think the 3rd couplet is the poem's most pleasing to the ear and eye. The premise isn't all that original, and the 5th couplet is somewhat of a let down; could use a pinch more punch to bring it on home.