Fevered Comments

I agree with Gessner, the formatting in terms of line breaks, punctuation, and varying diverse format of this poem and, in my opinion, of all four poems you have submitted to this site, demonstrates a poet who is unbridled and opens the floor for much interpretation to the readers. Well done. Beautiful images.

For me, it painted a beautifully vivid paradox - of feeling bound by night's infinity. It takes a great deal of imagination to blend such contrary ideas. Mad props and nothing short of genius. Love you.