Sunday, January 14, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

My temperature is rising
Anticipating the heat of you
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Petra Creffield
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Carl Harris 08 March 2009

I liked the intensity and pure sexual tension of this fascinating poem, Petra. It was very expressive and quite well written and a frank statement of how one feels about the wonders of lovemaking. It was simple and direct, and in the end, quite eloquent because of that. Carl.

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