Fever Comments

You have expressed very well the concern a mother has for a sick child. Nice poem indeed.

Yeah..A Mother gets very tensed and depressed when her child suffers from any ailment.. Very well expressed the pain a mother goes through..10++++

Spilling of pain from a mothers heart is strong here. Very nice.

This poem shows the affection of mother loves to child..... This poem shows the way that how mother feeling struggle in his heart when his child suffered from fever

nice lines......shows your love and affection towards you baby.She will be fine very soon inshallah

Awwwwwww such sensitive poem...God bless the child. You penned down so beautifully the pain a mother goes through seeing her child ill. Perfect 10++++