Sunday, May 24, 2015

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You crawls my crest in wandering ache
Thy thuds wean hopeful remnants of my strength
Boiling my blood in topmost Fahrenheit
Maimed, you would wish I be
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Nel Omofolarin
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Kelly Kurt 27 May 2015

Although I think some was lost in translation, I enjoyed the overall poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 May 2015

Fever! ! The very common sickness in Africa. To sink in lofty depth of my grave. Nice work.

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