Saturday, June 16, 2018

Fever Comments

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The room is spinning,
Enlarging in size.
The walls breathe in, and out.
I'm weak as a kitten;
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2018

Touching inscription has been made on illness and fever. Most touching lines are.... I'm weak as a kitten; My body perspires It's fever, there's no doubt. I am so sorry that you were on fever.

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Not to worry, Kumar- - - It's only a poem! I did not really have a fever. But I remembered/recalled what a fever felt like, and I described it and wrote about it. I do that type of thing quite frequently- - write from a memory of something. Thank you for commenting!

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