Fettered Liberty Comments

A nice poem, Manu. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

Love the title. Your poem has expressed in two lines a message that others needed sonnets to convey. Love it.

It is right, because the heart contains the whole world!

So expressive in so few lines!

Hope you won't break the padlock nor the door again to get into your heart.lovely piece though.Thanks for posting.

Hope you won't break the padlock nor the door again to get in your heart.lovely piece though.Thanks for posting.

Jasbir may have a valid point. There certainly is much to life besides affairs of the heart. For some, it may be less painful if love is not sought nor given. i straddle the fence** in my life. bri :) ** my definition in this case: 2. To appear to favor both sides of (an issue) .

Throwing away the key is pretty drastic, but understandable if your freedom is being choked when opened. Love the analogy! 10++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

I locked my heart and threw away the key The heart chokes but now I am free- - - -Freedom enjoyed in locked heart.Beautiful expression of paradox ! !

Very nice poem..Hope you open up again, for what is a human being with a choked heart?