Sunday, November 9, 2008

Fettered Freedom. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a close-woven garment, stiflingly
Tight, 'freedom' is tied close to our heart,
We yoke ourselves stiffly with shackling chains,
Though denying these fetters at the start.
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Fay Slimm
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Kris Smith 09 November 2008

There is wisdom in this ageless pen, it is to read and soak up Thankyou Chris 10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 November 2008

Fay, I see, The gilding on a cage…, struck a cord with you, beautiful poetry with meaning... Andrew 10

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Tia Maria 09 November 2008

ah we need you Fay to stay grounded - wise words heeded - brilliantly written, thank you 10/10 :)

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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