Tuesday, May 21, 2019

Fettered Freedomby Mudienyi Wa Mushira Comments

Rating: 3.5

These scars are still crystal clear,
They remind me of that star so dear,
The star that wanted to shine so clear,
Time that has swiftly flown,
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CHRISTOPHER MUDIENYI
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L Milton Hankins 09 August 2020

I found the poem very self-deprecating and distressing. The repetition of words and phrases were most ineffective, in my way of thinking.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2020

Such a nice poem, Christopher m. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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