# Fetish Comments

beautiful....in a concrete jungle..and buzz of impersonal life you planted a beacon of love a fount of everland .u come up with such tender stuff... beautifull...very nice did it twice only a tender loving heart can manage this chill

Hey Susan said it well indeed my dear ma'am... this is so very passionate and lovely.... I felt those lines in my veins.... I did only two or three these kinda poems, ... I believe poetry has to come from within.. don't know when I am gona write some thing as passionate and lovely as this one lolss.. But I feel this is written from heart with so much passion anyway really good one.. lots of loves/friend shan

This is sensual, seductive and beautiful - so much better than a fetish for feet! S ;)

Simply stunning poetry Sonya! The hands have it for you and I don't blame you! ! ! Especially with the 'veins like pathways'. I know the others have commented on this, but it did it for me too! Wonderful......love Karin 10

This is like a sweet lullaby. And yes, 'veins like pathways' is one KILLER line. The whole poem has a beautiful flow that gives it a great feeling of peacefulness.

Love and revere me And fold me and gently Lull me to sleep ...so sweet, the touch of a lovers hand...