Friday, October 11, 2013

Festivals Comments

Rating: 4.5

Work, work and only work
We humans are just like clerk;
No enjoyment, no fun
Just to see the rising sun.
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Vaishnavi Singh
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Festivals are important and for entertainment and to be participated for our happiness. The poem is beautiful.

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Wahab Abdul 10 November 2013

very....good flow with right content.. love it

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Kanav Justa 04 November 2013

Loved the way you used similis in your poem... nice work

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