Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Festival Of Fire Comments

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Fierce and fearful the rage.
I dare not open its page.
Lets i be held siege,
Under the authority of the unknown concierge.
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Okoronkwo Jonathan Jackson
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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 25 March 2012

Good work, great rhymes, but one important thing you do not apply is lineation. Re-edit it in the proper lines to bring out the beauty of your work.

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Okoronkwo Jonathan Jackson

Okoronkwo Jonathan Jackson

Ebonyi State Nigeria
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