Fervid Desire Within Comments

A beautiful work of art well articulated and nicely penned in persuasive expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

To hope for your love. Nice work.

Live, forgive and outlive with a poem.With Insightful thoughts it is a great poem.

a perfect rhyme with a perfect theme A memorable poem

Your rhyme scheme is so on point, Herbert: -)

Great lines.......Soothe with the moments of peace Beyond prose is significant Beautiful sensation will impart

....Immensely beautiful and radiantly beautiful poem

WONDERFUL LINES, BEST POEM Give warmth and fervid desire Live, forgive and outlive with a poem

An ardent and zealous poem to remember. So unique poem

Its a lovely poem. Live, forgive, and outlive with a poem I really like this line.

..........a beautiful poem narrating the impact of a poem on the poet and reader itself..............lovely write

I like how you put the title in your poem and gave it a whole surounding.

This gives a powerful touching lesson on living life peacefully with others, in terms of forgiveness

a very unique composition :)

nice poem... keep going

lovely poem.great write

Live, forgive and outlive with a poem! Heart of the read I loved it the most!

Live, forgive and outlive with a poem nice poem it may increase improve the life chance think of poems at once

a beautiful poem, poetry has no depth. keep it up my friend. a great write.

A beautiful summing up of what a poem is and what impact a poem should leave on the poet himself and the reader! The poem is made effective with its sound effect too! ! Enjoyed! !