Wednesday, July 4, 2018

Fertility Comments

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I was just a soil unaware of my fertility,
You made me aware how fertile I am,
It's your magic I knew how versatile I am,
O fertility! You are an amazing utility,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

Soon I ((((shall)))) ? ? ? ? ...) know my wonderful real worth! Your mind is already so creative use ur time to create many who would like to learn from you as I want to ur an INSPIRATION CREATIVITY is a naturalist in case of Janabh JA this any poet ON PH can say

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Valsa George 05 July 2018

For inspiration I shall risk my life in romance, I shall sing melodies, with Eve I shall dance, I have a long list of my instinctive needs. Shall love nature but next to my beautiful Eve, ......................... In these lines, I see your bubbling enthusiasm for life!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 July 2018

A wonderful poem with a meaningful message.. To continue the cycle of life, men must possess the ability to reproduce. Yet, it carries a great responsibility. Masterly crafted write.10++++++

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Kelly Kurt 04 July 2018

I was 30 when I had my 1st child. My 'baby', #6, will be 23 this year. I am growing my 12th generation of zinnias this year. Seeds collected after each season. The beauty is similar, but it does not escape me that we are so both similar. Fertile in reproduction (Evolution wouldn't be viable without it) and in our case, your case; thought. I will certainly never write with the beauty you possess. That comes within you alone.

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Red Soul 04 July 2018

To be fertile one needs to go through the pain, isn't it? A beautiful poem with lavish language and mesmerising myths. A fine poem Jawad sahab. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 July 2018

thoughtful writings - My body is mine and it will be buried in the clay, Soul is yours, play with it whatever you play.

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