Ocean of water
Running over thousand eight hundred miles
Wherever I see
Water water everywhere
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A tragedy that make d heart weep. Sad. Gud write up.
a sad story... a grand river has been a witness to many such tragedies...!
A sense of adventure means preparing ourselves mentally for the pleasures and the pains. In your poem you have dealt with tragedy in a dignified manner.
Love your sensibility and poetic narrative! ! ! ! Beautiful Vijay
Superb! ! ! ! Your theme was really different and great work...keep it up... »so close«
This is how life is operation. Many goes forward, but many will fall on the side and die. If we have faith in goodness, we survive if not.........
I am sorry for such a tragedy, though very well portrayed in your poetry. Once again, with great attention to detail!
Woah, that is surely an eye opener; beautifully written; I enjoyed it :)
God hear your prayer... Amen.