Tuesday, April 26, 2016

Fence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some wires full of thrones
Some cement filled pillars
full of small but sharp stones
Or
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Puspanjali Sahu
fog
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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2017

An insightful depiction of the fortress erected by a conglomeration of sinister shadows- without substance, whose sole purpose is the limitation of man's mind. Beautiful and motivational poem. Thanks for sharing Puspanjali.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 April 2016

Now we can not see standing on this side of fence sky of the other side Can not spread our hand with closed eyes and feel the morning fog Because Heart, that defines us started deceiving feeling of trust Yes dear poet.. Very few in this world can accomplish such difficult tasks..to smile under adverse conditions. Yet you see the hope. Thanks for sharing it. A perfect 10 for it. Subhas

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Halin Roche 26 April 2016

excellent poetry pushpanjali... n yes indeed u r correct... only few in this world smile in spite of problems...

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Puspanjali Sahu 02 May 2016

Thanks for your encouraging words

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