Femmes Fatales Comments

Wow, this is simply tremendous Atreyasarma. I think you have tremendous talent. Now to the details. First, you have chosen poetic language and style that is great and move the piece to the mythic level while retaining its very central concentration upon what is happening to women. Second is the passion here is a recitation of the history of a relationship. Third is Karmic justice is being proposed here and anger and suffering. It makes for a powerful mix. I have done something similar in 'The Gospel According to Lilith. You have made an epic poem in the manner of Homer. Great 10