Men in women
Though inseparable
And gender discrepancy
Many people protest
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FIVE: Her boyfriend came home from his work and could not accept this tragedy that his partner was killed, only because she wanted to repair and called the plumber. Within that year he died too because of heartache. This had really happened, I read that online in the Mumbai news.
FOUR: I feel tremendously with all the women in the Indian Society. Have you read that in Mumbai newspaper from a couple of months ago: a female lawyer has a free day and called a known plumber to repair in her house. Her boyfriend she was living with, had gone to his work as usual. He tried to rape her, but she opposed with all her strength and he killed her, just like that.
THREE: but I was once in Mumbai and my friend told me that, when I wished to walk on my own. As long as I was there, they accompanied me constantly. Your two lines in this poem: Why women............Still are physically assaulted. IF I may say, it is a socio-cultural heritage, I reckon. Because their fathers and again their fathers had done that all the time, that is the major example kids had to experience and be the witness.
TWO: Lucky that I don´t reside there as a woman. For men that is no problem here, but as soonest as you have a younger sister, you will know that. Do you know that India is number 4 or 5 (I dunno exactly, but is number 4 or number 5) in the world as a most dangerous country because of the many rapers? Perhaps you don´t know,
ONE: A brilliant poem! In the country where you reside, the ordinary man in society are well known as very brutal. I don´t mean you. This you cannot know IF you are a man. Most men constantly do this only to women. The news from two years ago, O still remember and thought:
Why women Still are physically assaulted Let us all fight Yes we poets should fight together Against all the injustices in this world Thank you dear poet for this poem on a call for a revolution.thank you again. tony
read my poem 'wife'.. The answer lies with in us. Dip where you are.
all is in our state of mind..male chauvinism, my friend. Imperfect society brings imperfect individuals. (Madamai)
i appreciate your respect for indiscrimination of gender, but just a litle more to add.... the protest should be also against mental abuse to women. i like your writing!
Thought provoking poem..There is no answer to the question why women are assaulted. The words we tell and in reality is very different. Woman have lot of capacity but their work is not appreciated. they can independently look after family but man in the house itself never like woman to rise, or come up..Till puberty they are under safe hands of father, parents, then husband, then children..Are they safe in society to live alone? NO..Every other minutes woman are insulted in every way..The world running today is this way only to be the worst. Good topic you have selected..Loved to be in this participation.
Why women Still are physically assaulted...... that's the question, not being answered, is it related to society, money, position in life, starvation, over educated or is it under education or no education, this happens every where women are being assaulted, basically it is the mind of a man, that is corrupted, sick mind, perturbed mind, some MEN find pleasure in assault they may belong to any walk of life, MENTAL buildup...That was a nice thought full poem, thank u
I am delighted to hear you speak out like this, women should be respected, that is their basic human right.
Women are mens equal and should be treated as equals. A good write. Write some more soon. I invite you to read my poems.
SIX: Such a horrendous experience for a women residing in India. May she R.I.P. After I wrote this, I am still in shock. Really, for me that is a country like a wild animals hole. Sorry, that is only my deep fear.