Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Feminine Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

By the magical eyes of my beautiful doll
By her graceful figure, so slim, so tall

By the fountain of life that is in her lips
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Lawrence Hiung
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Louis Cecile 17 March 2012

I like this piece as it is quite playful and the ending line works really well.

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Lawrence H 06 March 2012

this beautiful poem was extracted from a book entitled Hafiz: Drunk with God Selected Odes translated by Khalid Hameed Shaida, MD. Hafiz is a pen name for Samsuddin Mohamed, a self made scholar, a mystic and poet par excellence. who born in Shiraz, Persia (modern Iran) 1320 until he died in 1381 at the age of 61 in Shiraz.

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