Friday, June 13, 2008

Female (Free Form) Comments

Rating: 4.8

My husband calls this my feminazi poem. I guess that means he doesn't like it much...hehehe. I'm really not a feminazi...I was just having a bad day when I wrote it.

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Dawn Slanker
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D.l. Aceves 18 December 2013

I think Stand tall against is better than Stand up tall against. Good poem.

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C H Sund 02 September 2008

A fun read and definitely a different format for you.

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Fay Slimm 16 August 2008

Such good form and well thought out flow. Dawn you are a true wordsmith. Do keep writing. Fondly Fay.

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Ivor Hogg 14 August 2008

loved the wry humour but got the underlying message clearly. My wife is disabled so these jobs fall to me

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