Tuesday, July 17, 2007
Felt Comments
Rating: ★4.1
Unmortored brick wall,
ivy pushing block from
crack, there we hid and
played.
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Kath Moore
05 November 2007
7. This has details and images, so it works more. It could use even stronger details and images, but it's a good start. Side note: proper spelling is 'unmortared.'
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9/10/2025 10:09:17 PM # 1.0.0
You lose me at the start but then the rest drew me in. I just think the start needs to be redone, to make it a perfect 10.