Friday, January 8, 2016

Fellow Traveler Comments

Rating: 5.0

This moment I will raise a glass and toast you.
One by one, your special essence brings a smile
I think of all that is best within your being
Smooth out the loose ends and grin wide
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Edmund Strolis
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Dimitrios Galanis 12 January 2016

Your verses show that you have worked so much on composing then in rythm, in armony, in ton in vocabulary.It seems that you possess the ars poetica properly well.Proud of you.

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Pamela Sinicrope 08 January 2016

I will happily travel with you on our human highway. To Edmund! Clink!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 January 2016

Wonderful different voices flows on with expressive sharing. Finely drafted poem shared with reality. Interesting.10

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