Fellow Relationships............ Comments

A really magnificent poem illustrating lingering memories of walks, talks and laughter of a man; sweet smile, clear voice, fragrance, teasing of a girl; rhyme and trifles of a boy, thus taking all this along in fellow relationships, this girl teaches us..relationships..You have a great ART in your poems! voted 10+. Thanks. with mischiefs plenty seeking to spoil all her hands could coil yet looking cute and winning your fate all fellow bonds feather into the flights of life and living partnering along the way and accompanying upon the day.........

It's a beautiful poem and very interesting technically, with the alliteration and the use of rhyme. Understated, but that's a good feature. I really enjoyed it! HUGH