Monday, October 24, 2011

Felicity Comments

Rating: 5.0

(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)


He plays his instrument finely tuned,
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Rachel Butler
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Short and significant my friend!

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Sean Hill 31 January 2012

serenity smile and endeavored dreamed away the moment into an affinity of deeper understanding :) Love can be blind and Beautiful...i like this one a lot.

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R. H. Peat 24 January 2012

Melancholy (An offering to the flower girl) She has a old violin without a bow ... sawdust in silence resounds The swished horse’s tail is unheard. ... Nothing is never the “no thing.” Breathing— ... Night’s crickets commence; ... ...her song announces endowments What spheres revolve ... before engulfed inside .... .. love’s tacit turning bud? © RH Peat 1/21/2012 11: 17pm Form 3 stanzas/ 9 lines In Response: Rachel Ann Butler, hugs and kisses to her: Felicity

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R. H. Peat 24 January 2012

Is this intend? does it work if I have to ask? (...........................................univ erse)

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

Felicity in a muscial love/mount to its toppest hill! ! ! Great write! ! !

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