Dorothy Pugin

Dorothy Pugin

South Africa, living in the UK for the past 10 years
Saturday, May 13, 2006

Feinting At Hampstead Heath Comments

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I lie under leaves
of grave oak trees
and dodge the sieved sun
I shift my head
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Dorothy Pugin
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Will Barber 06 June 2006

The nicest thing about getting a comment on one's poem is that it points to the commenter's poetry. This is such a resonant work - images of the god of the oaks, sacrifice, the Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock - spring to mind. And even then, I'm sure I never discovered the secret of your song. That's the mark of a true work of poetry. Lovexx, Will

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Dorothy Pugin

Dorothy Pugin

South Africa, living in the UK for the past 10 years
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