Monday, July 29, 2019

Feint Finer Feelings Comments

Rating: 0.0

should I go all noble and say it doesn't matter,
look you in the eye at the point of sale,
deep blue oceans and say it's fine. I'm fine, your fine, we're fine
...
Read full text

Andy Brookes
COMMENTS
Smoky Hoss 30 July 2019

You’ve made me consider, perhaps ‘‘tis alright to fall on knee and cry, while speaking words that this is fine, perhaps all in the final analysis is fine after all, even in the flood of tears...

0 0 Reply
Jane Campion 29 July 2019

Such deep feelings belong only to one who knows. A beautifully crafted and caring poem.

1 0 Reply
Andy Brookes

Andy Brookes

Macclesfield
Close
Error Success