Saturday, June 6, 2009

Feet First Comments

Rating: 5.0

i came into this world feet first
they told my mother
out of her three sons, i would be the one
always on the run.
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louis rams
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2009

played the field with all the girls and told them whatever they wanted to hear. but i also made it quite clear that i was a man on the run and not be put under the gun...indeed it is comical and now i am enjoying it iwth fun.. so elegantstory and opoem to be absorbed inlife....10 read nine kids... no teacher please

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Sandra Fowler 09 June 2009

A very lively and vivid story.I am glad that it had such a happy ending.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Christine Kerr 08 June 2009

Nicely Done, (Just a Thought) 'There is more power in accepting life without power, ' Giving of your complete self can be the hardest or easiest thing to do. Your story explains it all so well. 10+++ From Chris

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Kranthi Pothineni 08 June 2009

Once again nice narration. Good ending.

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bro.. nice from birth till now.. i really like.. a lot. glad you cahnged

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a free flowing tale told very naturally..din't know feet first babies would have an attitude

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rago rago 06 June 2009

how nice....... life is that.........

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