Saturday, January 8, 2011

Feels Like... Comments

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Feels like I've been wating forever,
for the sun to rise,
for a chance again just to feel alive,
for something more out of this wasted life,
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Karly Jaye
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 May 2014

Good morning poet Karly. Your poem seems hopeless, and sometimes we all feel this way. Feelings can be deceptive, for God does hear when we pray. I enjoyed, Loyd

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