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these all are the natura things. Mothers smile and childs cry it comes to united that day she will be called mother. We will compare it for more natural beauties but this is real when she declares to her motherhood.

Beautiful poem! In the end there is nothing like a mother's hug when in despair.. Any mother is proud of her child but there is nothing on earth more rewarding than her baby's smile. May you keep close to your child and daily have a sip from those lovely smiles! Thank you for share,10

Great expression beyond the spell....Reality of understanding Nice Job 10+

what a lovely star in the sky! Made me feel emotionally high The gentle touch of which I can never deny Sole earthly objects fail to weigh............................. as it engrosses upon blue over skin of sky as light of love etches gloss of luminosity heart smooches in red by gleams of reflex soul serenades eternity by unearthly touch, ..inspiring write by the imagery bedecked by love of grace that redounds to joy within, yet of unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing

A nice one with soothing touch of love good description - rate 9

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Warmest regards Akmal

just a little time, those moment becomes the glamorous day of reading...nice reality in imagery of literature...God bless...a 10