Feelings We Are Afraid To Show Comments

Could be better; needs work on the English. The idea is not quite clear, but I think you have chosen a true feeling to write about. I would recommend that you revise the poem with the help of someone who can ask you questions about what you are trying to say and correct your English grammar

nice poem axsce...the best one i have read from.u so far

This is an exceptional poem, every word used was phenomenal, perfect poem. :)

Thank you guys. I really i appreciate.

very good thinking! wisdom beyond your years! good job!

This is really good! you should be very proud :)