The raw honesty pains me, as I live my everyday
My feelings are so deep... is there no other way
The pain, the hurt, I've tried so hard to get through it
Feelings so deep, feeling I may just loose it
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life can be good life can be tough but in the ens it is all worth while.
Your poems are about life's li'l though deep realities...very universal, i can see there's a meaning in this unpunctuated flow! ! !
Feeling like the world is tossing stones I know so well in this world there are far bigger issues Does this help? NO! I still need the tissues Great lines! ! Even when we know that our issues are relatively smaller, yet at times we can't take all!
I like the last line Lyn it could be the title of a poem. I might nick it off you! Joking apart a deep but poignant poem.
Every day is a challenge as that is life but the pain is balanced with the love and greatness also.
Life is so tough to take the pain and heartache is a challenge that is sometimes hard to bear! Superb write!
Heart is so full with feelings, sometimes we dive deeper into despair room inside it...we all feel it and no one missed it...Just wish we can find something that we can find hope one more time, something that can recall what happiness to us, may it again open us a secret door to be smile and survive one more time_Soul
There are no winners on this page of life life would've been so fulfilling had we let it influence our every action!
Who has happened to pass this phase knows well, what's mental agony! A great write Lyn!
Beautiful write Lyn...Yes, life is like that.....As you said I will see why the hurt and authorise the repair, Get the puncture kit and soak the tear...Loved reading it. Thanks for the inspiring comments for my poem....Thanks a lot.
Superb! Touching expression...loved this thoughtful write.