Feelings Never Shared Comments

I like the first lines and 'Saint' you are so a man of words... lots of them. but we all feel small and speechless at times. good write. Becca

Well my friend I definately disagree with one line you are a man of beautiful words and the reader is richer for reading them Thankyou Chris

A sad write that fear of rejection can stop a person from marching forth to pursue someone we are attracted to. It's in most of us to shy away. Your write was an excellent example of this feeling. Great rhyme and flow, a good write all the way round