Wednesday, June 6, 2018

Feelings For Another. Comments

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Standing here in the lit room,
You know exactly what to say when everything feels gloom.

The way you surprise me is like no other.
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Safiyyah Manjra
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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 June 2018

Safiyyah, such a lovely write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Safiyyah Manjra 07 June 2018

Oh Thank you Sir. Asuncion. Lovely things to say as always.

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Robert Murray Smith 06 June 2018

Some memorable stanzas in this well crafted write. A surprising last line.++10

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Safiyyah Manjra 07 June 2018

Thank you as always Sir. Smith. As a master of expression, I should know better than to express yet alone feel that last line. May it be true or not.

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