Monday, March 19, 2012

Feelings Felt Comments

Rating: 4.5

The foot prints bloom as flowers,
When you come closer.
The merry thoughts loom as shower,
When you speak sweeter.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Besa Dede 27 March 2012

Beautiful poem, written with a lot of passion and imagination. I pictured the foot prints turn in bloomed flowers, and the spirit symbolically flying away with the doves flight, through the open window. Thank you for sharing.

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Raj Arumugam 21 March 2012

love the imagery in this poem, VS

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Harindhar Reddy 20 March 2012

Simply amazing thought is this poem! A very good one easy to understand and read it like approaching the next door girl............ I hope you write many more poems like this.10+++++++++++++

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