Thursday, February 5, 2009

Feelings Are A Lie Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t know I never knew
What u told me and what I had to do
What u showed me and what I showed u
What was fake or what was true
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thomas coltrin
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Kesav Easwaran 15 June 2009

You said everything of it precisely in the last line, Thomas...good poem reflecting on the sober side of a relation that didn't last long...thanks...10

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Rachel Blank 06 March 2009

I like this poem.... especially the first stanza- very good with the contrasting ideas.

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Akram Saqib 24 February 2009

good but complex poem

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thomas coltrin

thomas coltrin

russia....kolasin
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