Feelings After Long Paper Comments

A great start with a nice poem, masarapu. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

you have composed an outstanding poem. keep it up with your study. You r more responsible. B fearless and go ahead. God will help u.

Conspicuously expressed feelings. Sublime. Although do keep sentences at similar length and begin with a capital letter. Just general grammatical requirements, nevertheless very good write. Williams, T.

believe its simple poem..coz dont wanna good poet worry for marks....easy...well that shows u wanna be more sincere n responsible...good! :)

Good.... Expressed your feelings clean n clear.... Keep writing many more...

Its a very true situation but luckily i have never faced

fine, , , , , , , , stand to the expectation of ur dad