Wednesday, June 1, 2005
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On the stone canvas
Beside the stream flowing onwards
Brushes dipping in
Each colors of the spectrum
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8/3/2025 1:07:38 PM # 1.0.0
Pushpa, I like to think of a poem as sugar and water boiled down to leave a crystal. You have some good ideas for a poem, but your language drones on and on. Look at this more critically and see what you can cut away to leave only the crystal. You can do it! Raynette