Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Feelings Comments

Rating: 4.8

I can’t stop thinking of you,
like a shoot you penetrated my heart,
consuming each muscle from it,
making me fool and invulnerable to this feeling.
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alex nascimento
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Teresa Dearing 04 April 2009

You write with passion and are so descriptive one can feel yur pain. T

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Flávio Bhawk 21 April 2008

Great piece, you wrote almost what I felt a few days ago. This one goes to my favorites.

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Saathi 4u 11 April 2008

hey dear.u wrote real things with deep observation, love and affection..it reflects ur young and fresh heart beating for ur lovely one.keep on giving such a nice feeeling.bye...

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Lacey Unknown 10 April 2008

This poem is truly gorgeous. So thrilling and enjoyable to read. It really stimulates feelings of joy love and sadness all at the same time. You are an incredibly brilliant poet. ~Lacey~

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Kesav Easwaran 10 April 2008

let her come back to you...but this is not the end... look towards east. hope rising... promising happiiness... keep writing, alex

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