I can’t stop thinking of you,
like a shoot you penetrated my heart,
consuming each muscle from it,
making me fool and invulnerable to this feeling.
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Great piece, you wrote almost what I felt a few days ago. This one goes to my favorites.
hey dear.u wrote real things with deep observation, love and affection..it reflects ur young and fresh heart beating for ur lovely one.keep on giving such a nice feeeling.bye...
This poem is truly gorgeous. So thrilling and enjoyable to read. It really stimulates feelings of joy love and sadness all at the same time. You are an incredibly brilliant poet. ~Lacey~
let her come back to you...but this is not the end... look towards east. hope rising... promising happiiness... keep writing, alex
You write with passion and are so descriptive one can feel yur pain. T