Sunday, September 20, 2020

Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

A feeling of satisfaction,
After having a meal to eat.
A feeling of relaxation,
When you put up your feet.
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Shaun Cronick
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Lodigiana Poetess 21 September 2020

if I might add...'A feeling of Thankfulness for the words of Poet friends' So well put Shaun and a wonderful read! Thank you for sharing this Lodigiana x

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Dominic Windram 21 September 2020

Nice sentiments expressed here Shaun. I really like your use of anaphora at the beginning of each stanza....works a treat! It's often the simple things in life that make it work living. It's taken me many years to work that out. It's definitely a filled with positive feelings inspired five from me!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 September 2020

A beautifully penned poem. Truly exceptional....5 stars +++

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