Saturday, December 5, 2015

Feelings Comments

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Into the alleys of pain
and into the spines of sadness.
I am standing voiceless,
motionless.
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Panos Ambelas
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Dimitrios Galanis 10 December 2015

It shows that you have the ability to write very nice verses.Transfer it, yourself into greek and not leave me to do it, which I do with poems I like.

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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2015

An insightful depiction of self-centred illness - depression, a painful and lonely deplorable condition in which self is sapped and ultimately consumed. Lovely poem beautifully brought forth. Thanks for sharing Panos. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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