Monday, July 30, 2012

Feelings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feelings drift like echoes
Through the hollows of the mind
Touching all the senses
As there within defined
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Valerie Dohren
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Hazel Connelly 11 September 2012

Lovely poem on feelings..

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James Casey 12 August 2012

Another fine poem from one of my favorite artists. Thanks again, Val

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Valsa George 11 August 2012

Feelings of joy and sorrow expressed in varying degrees through beautiful similes..... As ever this poem is melodious and precise and in excellent form! ! !

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 10 August 2012

Excellent writing on the variety of feelings, brilliant form and style.

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Ken E Hall 10 August 2012

Feelings so well spelt out...To rent your soul apart...feelings the meter of our hearts, it has my top vote indeed...regards

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Mark Dillon 09 August 2012

lovely, if we don't feel life, then we havn'T LIVED

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Simon Odhiambo 06 August 2012

I enjoyed going through the images created by this poem. Good work.

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Hans Vr 04 August 2012

A superb write on feelings. So true. Our heart plays such an important role in our life. Fantastic

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Ramesh Rai 04 August 2012

I find 100% accuracy what you have stated about feeling. I liked it

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 August 2012

Eloquent discourse on the many kinds of feelings we as humans have, and your words truly flow with excellent meaning.

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Walterrean Salley 03 August 2012

Revealing. A wonderful piece that captures a gamut of emotions –from one extreme to the other- all residing within.

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Danny Draper 01 August 2012

A well captured array of emotions precisely portrayed in this fine verse.

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Theodora Onken 31 July 2012

Beautiful take on ur emotions-feelings... Descriptive comparisons were spot on Valerie

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Neela Nath Das 30 July 2012

As you write Val, my dear poetess-----Beautiful.Feelings bring so many shades in our mind! Still, learning from your poems.

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Meena Mustafa 30 July 2012

Wow! Again I am speechless! a very beautiful write

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Dave Walker 30 July 2012

So true, your words are spot on a really fantastic poem.

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Heather Wilson 30 July 2012

How true, feelings do bring tears of happiness or pain, a beautiful poem..., a joy to read.

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Charles Bernard 30 July 2012

wow; i love this....

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Beautifully crisp and tightle woven quatrain stanzaic structure...Moves like those 'petals in the breeze'...Serene and substanceful write, Val ~FjR~

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