Feelings drift like echoes
Through the hollows of the mind
Touching all the senses
As there within defined
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Another fine poem from one of my favorite artists. Thanks again, Val
Feelings of joy and sorrow expressed in varying degrees through beautiful similes..... As ever this poem is melodious and precise and in excellent form! ! !
Excellent writing on the variety of feelings, brilliant form and style.
Feelings so well spelt out...To rent your soul apart...feelings the meter of our hearts, it has my top vote indeed...regards
I enjoyed going through the images created by this poem. Good work.
A superb write on feelings. So true. Our heart plays such an important role in our life. Fantastic
I find 100% accuracy what you have stated about feeling. I liked it
Eloquent discourse on the many kinds of feelings we as humans have, and your words truly flow with excellent meaning.
Revealing. A wonderful piece that captures a gamut of emotions –from one extreme to the other- all residing within.
A well captured array of emotions precisely portrayed in this fine verse.
Beautiful take on ur emotions-feelings... Descriptive comparisons were spot on Valerie
As you write Val, my dear poetess-----Beautiful.Feelings bring so many shades in our mind! Still, learning from your poems.
How true, feelings do bring tears of happiness or pain, a beautiful poem..., a joy to read.
Beautifully crisp and tightle woven quatrain stanzaic structure...Moves like those 'petals in the breeze'...Serene and substanceful write, Val ~FjR~
Lovely poem on feelings..