Wednesday, May 19, 2010

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The sun rises your heart breaks. Your tears fall, the earth quakes, felling your pain deep within. It is a tranquil day filled with sin.

Your stomach tightens your blood drops. Your head aches, your mind flops drowning in sorrow all the time feeling alone, seeing blind.
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Crazy Vampire 24 May 2010

good poem...this is how i feel right now..=[

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Monica Arlene 23 May 2010

Its sad, but very well written

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