The evening’s red horizons drunken heavy gaze
On the lip like a tendril and curves of heavy bosoms
The necklace that kisses the bunch of grapes as I hide
Sweet kisses on the swan neck and antelope eyes
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such a beautiful poem Sadiq that it reminded me of Morris Albert's song which I sang in school and won me the first prize. Ill quote it for you. FEELINGS Feelings, nothing more than feelings Trying to forget my feelings of love Teardrops rolling down on my face Trying to forget my feelings of love Feelings, for all my life I'll feel it I wish I've never met you, girl You'll never come again Feeling, woo-o-o feeling Woo-o-o, feel you again in my arms Feelings, feelings like I've never lost you And feelings like I'll never have you again in my heart Feelings, for all my life I'll feel it I wish I've never met you, girl; you'll never come again Feelings, feelings like I've never lost you And feelings like I'll never have you again in my life Feelings, woo-o-o feeling it, woo-o-o, feeling again in my arms Feelings ---10 anjali
Feelings, emotions what a human being is comprised of...a sense to reach out to individuals; may be it expressive, soft and timid, or just stay hidden...all in the name of love and hatred or just a platonic one...provokative one with nice imagery...10+++
feelings a lovely write sadiq.......deep and powerful as always..........feelings can be the only thing pure we can relate to........love or hate...whatever it is......and u have given a sensual twist to it........beautiful..........
Thank you for your good words. I wouldn't say 'superb' I definitely need to take my time piecing things together better. You are a great poet, wonderful use of language.