Feelings Poem by Jinal Oswal

Feelings

Rating: 4.3


There are many sentences which the mouth cannot convey…
There are many messages which neither of the services can deliver…
There are many words which are not expressed when seriously needed…
There are many actions which are not promoted in the right way…
But, There are times when inspite of these drawbacks it's "You" who shines.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babatunde Aremu 08 March 2013

Great write. This is is true to all

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Hardik Vaidya 08 March 2013

Jinal i was intrigued by the last line of your poem, pardon my ignorance, but who is the you, is it you, or the you which wants to leap out, is it the other, or are you reffering to god?

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Sahil Sood 17 November 2012

a beautiful write.. A true fact, just luvd reading it..

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Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

A VERY GOOD POEM, WELL CONCEIVED IDEA, AND ABOVE ALL WELL SAID, I LIKE IT, PLEASE READ ''A LIAR''

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Jacqui Broad 21 December 2011

Hi... What a beautiful poem! Expressing exactly my feelings I can't express lately. I knew I'd get the right words from someone, no surprice it was from you... Thank you...

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Barbara Nixon 08 March 2014

Great write, very insightful, beautiful.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 08 March 2014

congrats on being poem of the day...

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Jasbir Chatterjee 08 March 2014

Quite a thought-provoking poem...Because of inertia, words and statements do not often move as fast as they should...something always gets stuck...

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Leslie Philibert 08 March 2013

OK, not bad, but nothing too great

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Gajanan Mishra 08 March 2013

It is You who shines. thanks.

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