Tuesday, August 11, 2015

Feeling Older Comments

Rating: 5.0

When it’s cold outside
Put on something warm
and take it for a walk
if that’s possible
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M.J. Lemon
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Cowboy Ron Williams 23 February 2022

This poem resonates with an old codger like me...

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Bri Edwards 09 July 2021

Mark, I'm back to this poem after 2 years. Are 'we' feeling OLD? ? ? ! To my next showcase (July) . bri ;)

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

love your glimpses of aging that make us smile because of their painful truth_ 5 star rating

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M.J. Lemon 19 January 2021

Thank you so much, Susan. I think I may add an update.. Nostalgia is looking strange. I am finding I have a favourable outlook on things that were not so good at the time. Is this what age does? ! ? ! Thanks again, Susan.

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

MJ ---What would our days be like without your humorous yet wise observations? They would be boring, that's what! ! !

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

oh, Bri, humor can be spelled either that way or humour==I think it is a British thing like honor and honour

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Mj Lemon 27 August 2020

...And then decides to stay a while. Thank you so much, Robert.

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Leeann Azzopardi 12 May 2020

this iIs joyous description of getting old. Please MJ read my new poems especially And here's to you, Mr. McClure i hope you like them

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Mj Lemon 12 May 2020

Gracias LeeAnn. I'm off to your page!

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Aryan Nuwal 22 March 2020

hello liked it even no covid 19 but flu was nice pls be my friend share ideas for poems pls read my poems

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Mj Lemon 22 March 2020

Thank you, Aryan. I'm off to read your work. Thank you again.

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2019

ok, it was already in MyPoemList. :) i'll search for another one from you. bri :)

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Mj Lemon 29 August 2019

Many, many thanks, Bri!

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2019

i read again today. still don't see the " humour" . maybe humour looks different than humor? ? ? i mean, BESIDES a different spelling. i'm not sure if i sent to MyPoemList. it should be there soon if it ain't already. bri :)

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Jane Campion 02 July 2019

I liked the humor in your poem. Many thanks for your kind comments.

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Mj Lemon 04 July 2019

Thank you so very much, Jane.

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Bri Edwards 01 March 2019

once again i've enjoyed this poem, but............where's the " humour" ? i see the " life" & the " reality" . did i say that the last time? bri :)

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Mj Lemon 03 March 2019

I think so. And thanks again, Bri. If the humour is sublime and subdued, it may creep up....

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Kim Barney 26 February 2019

Great advice! My next-door neighbor, who is younger than I am, slipped on the ice in his driveway last week while trying to take out the garbage, and broke his hip. He had had surgery on his vocal cords years ago because of throat cancer, so he couldn't yell, and almost froze to death before his wife came out to see what was taking him so long. Almost everyone in my neighborhood is younger than I am...

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Mj Lemon 26 February 2019

Kim, wow, I hope he's getting better.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2018

You know you are blessed When your heart if filled with Peace Even in the storm.....so touching, true and impressive. A beautiful poem nicely executed. My pleasure reading time and again.

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Mj Lemon 10 January 2019

Kumarmani, I appreciate your readings. Many thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 April 2018

Being an old man myself, I can understand the feelings of another old man. Why the people bother to make fun of us, we have courage to make fun of ourselves better than the people. Such a great and nice poem.

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Mj Lemon 30 April 2018

Thank you, Akhtar. The humour, as always, helps.

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Loke Kok Yee 02 April 2018

We don't have to stop living, just slow down a little, a change of activities helps too. Best advice ever; and well written too.Thanks Mj

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Mj Lemon 02 April 2018

Thank you, Loke! I am starting to think that the slowing down is a must!

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Chan Mongol 30 January 2018

Very academic. The penned well. I respect the mind and the target of the poet to focus on an important issue. Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 30 January 2018

Thank you so much. I always hope, as time advance, that at least the mind preserves some youth.

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Jette Blackstone 21 December 2017

Ha! Yes, aging is a challenging gift and there are definitely rules to follow.

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Mj Lemon 21 December 2017

Jette, that is a great way of looking at it! Yes, - rules! Tremendous observation.

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Savita Tyagi 10 December 2017

Every day I look at beautiful Oklahoma sunshine and realize my changing attitude towards walk. Skipping it simply because of not wanting to put on warm cloths yet.

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Mj Lemon 11 December 2017

Thank you so much, Savita. And I am very much in sympathy with your attitude.

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Sarah Mkhonza 14 November 2017

This poem made me confront my issues on this topic. I liked the way it makes me be honest, and face the back problems that are in this life of mine and some people around me. It is written on a subject we take for granted.

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Mj Lemon 14 November 2017

Thank you so much, Sarah. So very good to see you again.

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