Feeling Of War Comments

I like this poem because it has truth. I dont diagree with war but i do believe that we do go for the wrong reasons. Great writing cant wait to read more. God Bless, Nyia

WOW! that is amazing you have a real talent keep writing

Wow, this is pretty deep...and real...and blunt. It's depressing, but eye-opening. Simply put, it's good...

you speak the truth so well...! ! !

I like this alot. your writing is very raw, and real. it's refreshing. =)

i agree war is not the answer and its killing us off

dude i love this poem its awesome! lol perfect 10

i agree totally this is pointless war we r in and innocents lives r being tooken away so the govt could b the highr power! ! ! 10+++ thx for posting DLG

i do too. i hate war. i wish we could end all wars. great job.

a war of depression can make even me with a heart of love fall to the ground nobody should feel the pain of war make more poems to touch me and the world

i like it...so true, good job keep it up.

Perfect description, and 10/10 for the raw emotion you portray in everything.

that was so beautiful (well not the part about people dying) the way as i read each line i could see the war playing like amovie in my head, like i could see the thousands of people and the looks on their faces and their armor in the way it looked when people fought wars back oh so long ago and i really can't describe this poem with any other word than beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! amazing job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I love the feeling of anxiety threaded through it, like they are not just killing machines, but men in fear. But there is also an iron bravery there. Fantastic! :)

wow! this is ANOTHER great poem! i feel the same way! just know....you're not alone!

Awesome! A pure thrilling battle scene straight from the big picture. Highly deserving of a ten. -Kylie M. Lynch

i feel the same way i wish it would just stop what a really good poem

Very true. Good similies [I hope I spelled that right. You know what I meant.] Love always, Lindsay