Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Feeling Of Emptiness Comments

Rating: 5.0

emptiness
so close,
yet cannot be touched.,
just like
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ritty patnaik
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Bob Blackwell 22 July 2009

Ritty, your thoughts are my thoughts in this poem. I have done a lot of waiting in my life, also hoping for time to slip by to some future event. Absent loved ones all bring an emptiness. Now I only live in present time, I have no regrets no real future wants. Life is now, so I live right now. I love your poetry, it has so much heart. Bob

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 July 2009

emptiness emitted very well! .......10+

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