I feel empty inside,
banished from your life.
Here am breathing and talking
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The poetic confessions on auto suggestions and illusive inhibitions are never to depress you dear poet. The quality of thoughts intense will make 'you' a better poet perhaps.'Your' vehemence and phase of woes self inflicted otherwise are just going to fade. A metal burning in the fire gets strengthened and shaped well.Similarly the 'speaker' in the poem will be blended well soon.
Good confession. Congratulation. I love it. I would like to invite you to read my poems and comment.