Saturday, May 5, 2012

Feeling Like Ablue Moon Comments

Rating: 4.8

When home is no longer there
And there's no place
To spend the holidays,
Except where you are
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Romeo Della Valle
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eloida Capuno 08 June 2012

We all go through such feeling every now and then but we should not let the feeling consume us. I have wriuten one similar poem, its titled 'You Cant Go Home'. I invite yoy to check it out when you have the time. I like your poems, please don't stop writing. Best regards.

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Do you really think that people in that situation, think the way that you have written? People are displaced for various reasons such as education, employment, social issues and the rest.

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Unwritten Soul 15 May 2012

It's gloomy atmosphere but your creativity here makes it sound clear and has some unique to that feeling...But Romeo, we need to remember the more we care about the gloomy things the darker it will be...I think you are using whole feelings dark or bright to create a such beautiful garment to wear on your soul..You are not small and you just not because we become smaller when we see other is bigger...but the fact is you are not smaller than other and it's normal :) be happy always my friend_Unwritten Soul

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Nontobeko Dlamini 10 May 2012

Sad...emotional and sincere, can feel the pain woven in this masterpiece. Family is who we are...well said, thank you for sharing!

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Hilal Yilmaz 10 May 2012

Great write! It's a sad poem, but i guess it's true. Thank you for one more great poet on this earth: You!

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Captain Cur 09 May 2012

Very sophisticated handling of the loneness one feels at those times of year, when everyone else seems to be surrounded by family and warmth. Okay, enough ballyhoo, everyone is invited to my ship for Thanksgiving, bring rum.

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Hans Vr 08 May 2012

For me it was easy to connect to this poem. Famly is so important, and without them we do feel small sometimes Great poem

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Gabriel Gauci Maistre 08 May 2012

Fantastic read, loved it! 5/5

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Sossi Khachadourian 07 May 2012

So emotional...and sad but very true and fantastic...good write my friend Blessings and peace!

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Cosmic Dreamer 06 May 2012

We all leave an impression on this earth... We are never nothing, for we all have our place in this cosmic plan... Very well written poem my friend... Peace, love and happiness...

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Eric Cockrell 06 May 2012

we all need family, to be a part of, sometimes! good poetry.

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Heather Wilson 06 May 2012

So much emotion in this poem, I`ve read it several times and finished up with a tear in my eye. Sadness and beauty wrapped together. a wonderful write.

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Dave Walker 05 May 2012

A really fantastic poem with real emotion. Fantastic.

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

Dominican Republic
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