When home is no longer there
And there's no place
To spend the holidays,
Except where you are
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Do you really think that people in that situation, think the way that you have written? People are displaced for various reasons such as education, employment, social issues and the rest.
It's gloomy atmosphere but your creativity here makes it sound clear and has some unique to that feeling...But Romeo, we need to remember the more we care about the gloomy things the darker it will be...I think you are using whole feelings dark or bright to create a such beautiful garment to wear on your soul..You are not small and you just not because we become smaller when we see other is bigger...but the fact is you are not smaller than other and it's normal :) be happy always my friend_Unwritten Soul
Sad...emotional and sincere, can feel the pain woven in this masterpiece. Family is who we are...well said, thank you for sharing!
Great write! It's a sad poem, but i guess it's true. Thank you for one more great poet on this earth: You!
Very sophisticated handling of the loneness one feels at those times of year, when everyone else seems to be surrounded by family and warmth. Okay, enough ballyhoo, everyone is invited to my ship for Thanksgiving, bring rum.
For me it was easy to connect to this poem. Famly is so important, and without them we do feel small sometimes Great poem
So emotional...and sad but very true and fantastic...good write my friend Blessings and peace!
We all leave an impression on this earth... We are never nothing, for we all have our place in this cosmic plan... Very well written poem my friend... Peace, love and happiness...
So much emotion in this poem, I`ve read it several times and finished up with a tear in my eye. Sadness and beauty wrapped together. a wonderful write.
We all go through such feeling every now and then but we should not let the feeling consume us. I have wriuten one similar poem, its titled 'You Cant Go Home'. I invite yoy to check it out when you have the time. I like your poems, please don't stop writing. Best regards.